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Hama's class - focusing inquiry

What was important, given where Hama’s students were at?

This is a bilingual Year 9 class with a wide range of abilities in English, and a variety of literacy skills. This lesson occurred in Term 3, in a class where there has been a writing programme throughout the year. Hama wants his students to achieve success as Māori. In order to do this, he uses strategies that allow him to co-construct the learning with the students. Students are actively involved in leading the learning where possible.

Video clip: Co-constructing

What evidence did Hama draw on?

Te Kotahitanga’s focus on culturally responsive pedagogy is the underlying factor in all practice for the bilingual unit. A large part of this teaching philosophy is the recognition of each individual within the group. In addition, the English department has a particular understanding of teaching and learning writing that has been developed through the Collins Writing programme.The students range from Level 2 to Level 5 in e-asTTle Reading. Hama did not want to focus on this in his teaching but rather used an Achieved/Merit/Excellence rubric to set high expectations for all students in the class and to allow them to set their own goals for their writing.

Video clip: High expectations and goal setting

What evidence did Hama draw on from his own practice or that of his colleagues?
The bilingual unit sits between the Māori department and other subject departments and functions as a cohesive unit. Therefore there is a commonality of practice across all the subjects. This allows for a much greater transfer of knowledge and content across subjects than is usual for secondary students. It also means that Hama has a deeper knowledge of his students in other subjects and beyond the classroom.

Hama's class - teaching inquiry

The merchant of Venice

Students are encouraged to engage with and reflect on key themes, develop their understanding of characters and appreciate the historical context of the play. They then plan and write essays on selected topics.

Learning Outcomes | Teaching and Learning | Assessment and Evaluation | Printing Version

Writer: Ann Hamer
Year level 13
Who are my learners and what do they already know? See  Planning  Using Inquiry
School curriculum outcomes How your school’s principles, values, or priorities will be developed through this unit

Learning Outcomes

 (What do my students need to learn)

Curriculum achievement objectives (AOs) for:  
English

Processes and strategies

Integrate sources of information, processes, and strategies purposefully, confidently, and precisely to identify, form, and express increasingly sophisticated ideas.


  • thinks critically about texts with understanding and confidence
  • creates a range of increasingly coherent, varied, and complex texts by integrating sources of information and processing strategies

Ideas

Select, develop, and communicate sustained and insightful ideas on a range of topics.


  • develops, communicates, and sustains sophisticated ideas, information, and understandings

Language features

Select, integrate and sustain a range of language features appropriately for a variety of effects.


  • uses a wide range of text conventions, including grammatical and spelling conventions, appropriately, effectively, and with accuracy.

Structure

Organise texts, using a range of appropriate, coherent, and effective structures.

  • organises and develops ideas and information for a particular purpose or effect, using the characteristics and conventions of a range of text forms with control.
Achievement Standard(s) aligned to AO(s) AS 90722 Respond critically to Shakespearean drama studied.

Teaching and Learning

 (What do I need to know and do?)

1-2 related professional readings or links to relevant research

Planning  Using Inquiry

English Teaching and Learning Guide 

Learning task 1:

Learning intention(s)

Establishing prior learning and linking it to the text

KCs/ Principles/Values focus

KCs:

Thinking – explore texts

Relate to others – peer discussion

Learning task 1

Introduction

  1. Draw up concept circles containing the following words: mercy, justice, money, law and marriage, love, money, religion. In pairs student discuss these words and what connections they have. Focus is on their modern meanings. Class discussion to follow which expands on the ideas.
  2. Look at the historical background resource that has information about Elizabethan times. Write questions on the board then select the slip that has the correct answer. This activity encourages reflection and conveys information about the historical context of the play.
  3.  Read through the play and act out scenes. Reading is completed on a stage area designated in the classroom with discussion of plot, characters and themes after each section of the play.

Learning task 2:

Learning intention(s)

Examining key text aspects

KCs/ Principles/Values focus

KCs:

Thinking – using a range of thinking strategies to build understandings

Relate to others – peer discussion

Learning task 2

Plot

Complete a plot diagram that allows visual learners to see the dynamics of the play. Two settings are outlined: Belmont and Venice. Identify who goes where and why. The four plot elements: give the casket plot, the pound of flesh plot, the ring plot and the development plot a different colour.

Character

Focus on characters using following worksheets:

Themes

Focus on themes starting with issues. Consider issues in the play and rank them in order of agree and disagree continuum. Each worksheet has a symbol attached to the sheet and students pair up with the person with the same symbol. This allows students to work with different people. Pairs discuss their opinions and then relate them to the play. Pairs write two paragraphs about two of the issues.

Three level guide about appearance and reality

"I hold the world but as the world, Gratiano. 
A stage where every man must play a part
And mine a sad one" (1,1, 79-80).

Tick or cross the following statements. Defend your reasoning with supporting evidence from the play.

Level 1


  • All that glitters is not gold.

  • Portia dresses as a man in order to escape the confines of the female gender.
  • Bassanio come to Belmont as a beggar.

  • Antonio appears depressed but denies it is his business ventures.

  • Shylock appears mean and greedy.

  • Portia is not beautiful
.
  • Shylock's defensive attitude is a result of years of abuse.

Level 2

  • A "noble friendship" exists between Antonio and Bassanio.

  • The inner person is often hidden by a mask.

  • Make up and appearance are important features of our lives.

  • Bassanio's loss of the ring shows that he does not value deep love symbolised by the ring.

  • Telling lies can be justified in certain situations.

  • Shylock treats Antonio honestly.

Level 3

  • Racism is derived from appearance.

  • Mercy is an inner value rather than an outward value.

  • Justice is the outward symbol of our civilisation.
  • Portia's ring deception is to test Bassanio's inner nature.

  • Faces act as a motif for appearance and reality in the play

  •  Portia is the spokesperson for inner reality as against outward appearance.
"like a villain with a smiling cheek
a goodly apple rotten at the heart" (1,3, 97-98)

Learning task 3:

Learning intention(s)

Examining key text aspects

KCs/ Principles/Values focus

KCs:

Thinking – close reading

Learning task 3

Making connections

  1. Bring an object to class and give a two minute speech about how that object links with the text. It can relate to a character or a theme. This allows you to start making connections with your life and the play. It also develops an analytical approach to the play.
  2. Close analysis of speeches Choose one of these speeches. Once you have ordered it and worked out the modern translation, focus on what the passage tells you about character and theme. This activity encourages a closer look at the language of the play and helps you prepare for the examination question. Report back to class.

Imagery in the play

  1. Imagery is important in a text because it adds another dimension to the text. It enhances and extends meaning and often helps to develop character or theme. Complete the  imagery resource. Think carefully about who is speaking and to whom.

    There are nature images - Antonio's reference to mountain pines "fretten with gusts of heaven" (4,1,77) and Gratiano's image of the ship (2,6, 14). The floor of heaven is described as a mosaic "thick inlaid with patines of gold"(5,1,58-9). Cowards are said to have false hearts like "stairs of sand"(3,2,83). Gratiano describes men whose faces are like ä standing pond" (1,1, 88). Shylock is compared to a dog and uses the image himself (4,1, 133, and 3,3,6). Also see Shylock's description of how Christians use dogs (4,1, 90-93).

    There are also images about the city. Antonio's ships are like rich burghers (1,1,9-14). When Bassanio wins Portia he feels like a prize-winning wrestler who hearing the applause stops "Giddy in spirit.." (3,2,144). Later he feels the "pleased buzzing" among the crowd after a speech by royalty (3,2,179).

    What matters is the choice of image but these points are relevant. Do not, however, go on at length about them in an essay.

    Bassanio and Portia use the most images in the play, between them accounting for half of the images in the play. Imagery is used unevenly in the play. It centres mainly around Bassanio's choice of casket and Act 5.

    In the three casket scenes, imagery is used unevenly to create different tones and feelings. Morocco uses 4 images in 79 lines, Arragon uses 3 in 84 lines. With Bassanio's choice Portia uses 7 in only 18 lines (3,2, 44-62). Bassanio uses 12 in 32 lines.

    Noteworthy is the fact that the trial scene does not use much imagery - 10 in 457 lines.

Music

  1. As well as using images, Shakespeare refers to music in order to build up atmosphere. Spurgeon (1952) shows how the two moments of emotion and romance are accompanied by music: Bassanio's choice of casket and the return to Belmont by Portia at the end of the play. In Act 5, scene 1, lines 53-98 (45 lines) it is named more often than in any other play. Shakespeare describes how the power of music can tame and subdue a herd of young horses:

    "If they but hear perchance a trumpet sound,
Or any air of music touch their ears,
 You shall perceive them make a mutual stand,
Their savage eyes turn'd to a modest gaze" (Act 5, scene 1, lines 76-78).

    Lorenzo goes on to assert that no man should be trusted if they cannot be moved by the power of music. This is very fitting in a play that is about emotion. Shylock does not like the music of the masque earlier in the play and urges Jessica to "stop my house's ears" (Act 2, scene 5, line 34).
    Reference: Caroline Spurgeon (1952). Shakespeare's Imagery and What It Tells Us.

Conclusion

  1. Ask students to complete a jigsaw activity on a critical reading of the play. In groups they look at a critical reading of the play (such as Harley Granville-Barker or WH Auden from Critical Essays 1991 or Bill Overton) and each group focuses on one part of the essay. Groups then meet together to hear about the whole article. This allows everyone in the class to participate but also to have support from others.
  2. In small groups, students use the essay resource to develop an essay. Include quotations to illustrate the essay.
  3.  Analyse an Exemplar Essay based on the play. They annotate key features such as supporting ideas, answering the question, linking paragraphs, using quotations.

Learning task 4:

Learning intention(s)

Drafting and polishing writing.

KCs/ Principles/Values focus

KCs:

Use language, symbols and texts – structure and express understandings about texts

Learning task 4

Developing an essay

  1. The Merchant of Venice is prescribed Level 3 play until 2012. From 2013 with the introduction of the curriculum aligned standards at Level 3, there are no longer prescribed Shakespearean plays so that any play could be used for the new level achievement standard 3.2 Respond critically to specified aspect(s) of studied written text(s), using supporting evidence
  2. As formative work for AS 90722 Respond critically to Shakespearean drama studied, develop an essay on a topic linked to an aspect of learning tasks 2 or 3. In selecting a topic, it is vital that you select one suited to your understandings about it. As a first step in making a selection, consider the topics set.Talk with your teacher about the most appropriate topic for the learning completed in tasks 2 and 3. In selecting a topic, give preference to a topic in an paper from the last few years.
  3. Look at the annotated not achieved, achieved and excellence exemplars. Additional exemplars are also available for this achievement standard by ordering the NZATE exemplar resource.
  4. Look over the Assessment Reports for AS 90722. As identified in the report, an excellence level response:
    • showed extensive knowledge of the play, and made apt references to critical works about the play
    • related understanding of the play to wider human issues, including modern-day events, to indicate a broader knowledge of themes
    • showed an awareness of both modern and Shakespearean audiences (placed the audience)
    • wrote fluently and accurately, often extensively
    • used high quality, academic language in their responses, with mature understanding of essay structure and logical sequencing of argument.
  5. Having selected a topic, develop an essay. Write at least 400 words. Support your ideas with specific details from your work in learning tasks 2 and 3.
  6. After completing a first draft, read your piece aloud to help identify parts of the writing that require reworking. Before writing a final version of your piece, proof-read it to improve on technical accuracy. Prior to writing the final draft, you should return to the exemplars to help reflect on whether any changes or additions are needed in your own final draft. You should also refer to the Assessment Schedule for AS 90722.

Preparing for AS90722 at the end of the year

  1.  Look back at the essay you developed earlier and use it to help prepare for the external standard. Don’t rote learn this essay then attempt to somehow adapt a learnt essay to a topic in the exam. You will be much better prepared if you familiarise yourself again with the text as well as its ideas and supporting evidence, then adapt your understandings and supporting evidence to fit the requirements of the topics set.

Learning task 5:

Learning intention(s)

Extending learning

KCs/ Principles/Values focus

KCs:

Thinking – explore texts

Learning task 5 – Additional Resources

Electronic

           Lists some useful sites and both raises and answers several questions about the play

Print

  • Arden Shakespeare "The Merchant of Venice" - Russell Brown (1955)
  • Longman "The Merchant of Venice" - John O'Connor (2000)
  • "Hodder English 4 The Merchant of Venice" - Jo Shackleton (1998)
  • Harvester "New Critical Introductions to Shakespeare" - John Lyon (1988)
  • "Shakespeare's Imagery and What It Tells Us" - Caroline Spurgeon (1952)
  • York notes advanced "The Merchant of Venice" - Michael and Mary Alexander (1998)
  • "Critical Studies: The Merchant of Venice"- Graham Holderness (1993)
  • "Studies in English Literature 21 "Shakespeare Merchant of Venice" - David Moody (1964)
  • "Merchant of Venice: Critical Essays" - Wheeler (1991)

Other

  • The Merchant of Venice, starring Laurence Olivier. Directed by John Sichel 1992

Assessment and Evaluation

 (What is the impact of my teaching and learning?)

Formative and/or Summative assessment task(s), including how will feedback be provided AS 90722 Respond critically to Shakespearean drama studied.

Provision for identifying next learning steps for students who need:

  • further learning opportunities
  • increased challenge
This piece of writing should be an integrated part of the year’s writing programme. Refer to English Teaching and Learning Guide 

Tools or ideas which, for example might be used to evaluate:

  • progress of the class and groups within it
  • student engagement

leading to :

  • changes to the sequence
  •  addressing teacher learning needs
See  Planning  Using Inquiry

Printing this unit:

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Learning task 2: Maps and personal stories

Maps

On the World Map find New Zealand, Turkey, Germany, Russia, Australia and England. Look at the distance between each country. Discuss how the young soldiers might have felt being so far from home. Provide students with a map of the world to find and colour each country a different colour.

On a map of Turkey locate the Dardanelle's, Constantinople (Istanbul), Gallipoli, Mediterranean Sea and the Black Sea. Give the students their own copy of the map and help them to use mapping skills to locate each place.

On a map of the Gallipoli Peninsular, locate and name ANZAC Cove, Suvla Bay, Chunuk Bair, Quinn's post.

Use the information to discuss with the students the silence and with-drawal.

Explain how the ANZAC soldiers deceived the Turks, practicing making no noise and no talking for weeks before the evacuation. Discuss the devices used to trick the enemy. Explain the contraptions they made to fire their weapons when there was no one left to shoot.
Discuss with the students:

  • Why did the Anzacs have to withdraw?
  • Why did the Anzacs admire the Turks?
  • What made the Turks fight with such determination?
  • Why were the Turks so committed to defend Anzac Cove?
  • Why did the soldiers practise silence?
  • How did they manage to withdraw without the Turkish army knowing?
  • Why do you think people called this ingenuity, number 8 wire mentality?
  • Why did people think it was bad luck to be the third person to light their cigarette from the same match? Explain about the snipers and how the men in the trenches said that while the first person was lighting their cigarette the sniper would get ready to shoot. For the second person he would aim and the third person he would fire thus shooting that person.

Discuss what information should be added to the class ANZAC chart. Teacher records the information based on the class discussion. Add information to the original chart - silence and withdrawal and the use of ingenuity.

Read to the students the story of Simpson and his Donkey. See also other sites about this story: John Simpson Kirkpatrick.
Discuss:

  • Does it matter whether Simpson was an Australian or New Zealander?
  • Why has this story become so important in our remembering Gallilopli?

 

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Learning task 3

News report

Ask students to write the following sentences on the board:

  1. The public have been warned not to approach the animals.
  2. It is believed to be roaming near the Crosby Rd area with another dog.
  3. The pitbull terrier cross killed seven sheep on a farm near the edge of the city on Wednesday night.
  4. A dangerous dog that attacked a Hamilton dog ranger before being shot is still missing.

Students read these sentences aloud to each other in pairs. Check that they understand: Who? Where? What? When? Why? How?

Ask students to choose the best headline for this report:

  • Where are they?
  • Dangerous dog still missing
  • Sheep killed

Ask students to explain to a partner why they chose this headline, then write the explanation in their books. Sort the sentences into the correct order.

Assessment

Use the models of the reports you have read and the FactsSheet (Word 44KB) to write a short report. Look at the Assessment (Word 24KB) before you start your report.

Extension task

Give the students the following extension task.

Be a reporter!

Choose something that is going to happen or has happened at your school and write a news report about it. This could be a real event (such as sports exchange or a cultural event or some news about a teacher or student) or you could make up an event.

Write your report, give the report a headline, find or draw a picture for the report and give the picture a caption. Display the report in the classroom.

Conclusion 

Use a learning review sheet to make a (individual) list or a concept map for newspapers:

  • What I have learned about newspapers ...
  • What I have learned how to do ...

Learning task 1

Developing reading skills

1. Issue each student with a copy of the short story The Garden Party.

2. The teacher reads, or better still, plays a dramatised tape while students follow the story on their copies. It is suggested that you break the text into three parts or page by page. After each reading: clarify, question, summarise and predict similar to the reciprocal reading process, for example:

  • Ask students if they require any words clarified.
  • Ask if there are any questions about parts they don't understand.
  • Ask students to summarise what has happened
  • Ask students to predict what will happen next.

3. To encourage confidence with reading model the reading strategies at the end of the vocabulary worksheet and loan out the tape.

Preparing to write

The activities in this section are designed to provide students with the techniques and skills required for writing a characterisation. Tasks focus on sentence structure, developing and organising ideas and essay structure. They are sequenced in order for teaching, but the order may be changed.

See also, Characterisation from the English Online Unit, Writing for Publication

  • Students may complete the grammar (Word 30KB) tasks for homework or the class jointly work through the Grammar Comprehension Task - Answers (Word 30KB) .
  • To assist students' in organising their ideas use a graphic organiser to complete the LiteraryWeb (RTF 3MB) or model the LiteraryWebAnswers (RTF 3MB) .
  • Prepare the mix and match quoteMatchingActivity ( 41KB) prior to the lesson.
    •  o Students complete the mix and match activity using the first envelope.
    •  o Students make their own notes using the worksheet.
    •  o Review the answers by completing the mix and match activity using both envelopes.
    •  o Expand students' knowledge of descriptive words for character traits. The worksheet may be completed for homework.
  • As a class complete the characterisation web or model the answer on an OHP.
  • Explicitly teach exemplification using the worksheet with a focus on accurate grammar.
  • Allow able students to complete the worksheet on referents or project an OHP of the worksheet onto the whiteboard. Invite individual students to mark their answers on the whiteboard. Students then complete their own worksheets.
  • Elicit from the class, or explicitly explain, techniques the writer uses to show character traits. Jointly complete a concept map on the whiteboard. At the same time students take notes on their own concept map which should be checked for accuracy as they may be referred to for the summative task. Complete the narrative technique task.
  • Prepare in advance the paragraph reconstruction task for students to complete in small groups. Discuss or revise paragraph structure.
  • Explicitly teach writing an introduction and discuss language features

Learning task 3

Expected time frame: 2–3 lessons

These post-reading activities are designed to enable students to understand and think about key events, setting and participants in and beyond the text. They also enable students to follow a lexical chain, understand how pronoun reference works and identify some verb processes in a historical recount.

Providing many opportunities for academic language use with a focus on using authentic language

  • Ask students to read the text again and complete the 3 Level Thinking Guide (Word 23KB) . They should do this on their own and then compare their answers with those of a partner.
  • Ask students write a one sentence summary of the origin of the idiom "D Day". Students read their summary to a partner.
  • Ask students tell a partner about one event in their life that they could describe as "D Day".

Give learners many opportunities to first notice then use new language

Lexical chains

  • Ask students, in their groups of three, to check the lists they made under the headwords – army, boats and weather - and delete any words that were not found in the text. Ask them to add at least three more words linked to the headword that were found in the text and identify what part of speech each word is. Students should also think about and discuss how the words in the chain are linked and how lexical chains function as a cohesive device (Word 39KB) in texts.
  • The following annotation to the D Day text in ELIP should be pointed out to students if they do not notice this feature themselves:

Almost every paragraph has a synonym or substitution for "army"as the first element of the topic sentence to help track the information through the text viz. Para 1 D Day, Para 2 (In June 1940) the Allied army, Para 3 (Four years later) they, Para 4 The commanders of the army, Para 5 The first day they chose, Para 6 The generals, Para 7 Change of focus – Nowadays – so "army" is no longer the focus.

Pronoun reference

Ask the students to identify the nouns and noun phrases in the pronoun reference task (Word 39KB) . One example has been done for students, but some may need further guidance.

Verb processes

  • Explain to students that there are different types of verbs which describe different types of processes. Linking verbs are those which show a link between the subject of the verb and something which it is or has. These are mostly is and have. Action verbs are those which describe something happening e.g. run, fight. Mental verbs describe thinking and feeling processes e.g. understand, love and saying verbs describe ways of saying things e.g. shout, whisper.
  • Ask students to fill in the Verb Table (Word 28KB) with some different types of verb processes from this text. Beside each verb write the subject of the verb in brackets. Make sure students include all parts of the verb group. The first example has been done for students. Ask students what they have noticed about the types of verb processes used in this historical recount.

Reflection

Ask students to complete the learning grid (Word 33KB) at the end of the unit to identify which of the language learning outcomes they think they have met. Discuss with students to see if further teaching and learning needs to be done on specific outcomes for individuals or groups of students.

Where to next?

It is suggested that students read more complex historical recount texts at ELIP stage 3 using guided reading approaches.

For students who are interested in learning more examples of idioms in English the following resources may be useful:

http://languagearts.pppst.com/idioms.html




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