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Focusing inquiry: Know learning pathways

Learning about my students' needs

What is important (and therefore worth spending time on), given where my students are at? This focusing inquiry establishes a baseline and a direction. The teacher uses all available information to determine what their students have already learned and what they need to learn next.

Key questions

  • Where has this programme come from?
  • Where can it lead?
  • Does it ensure all learners are able to progress without structural constraints?

Why are these questions important?

In years 9 and 10 the values, key competencies and learning areas lay the foundation for living and further learning. For senior students, schools need to enable access to future school programmes, the workplace, and tertiary courses.

Useful resources

Focusing Inquiry: Know your students

What literacy knowledge and skills do my students have in Science?

Use multiple sources of information to determine the focus of your inquiry – student voice, assessment information, diagnostic tasks.

  • Assessment Tools for Teaching and Learning e-asTTle This is a norm-referenced online tool for assessing reading achievement relevant to levels 2–6 of the curriculum. It provides national norms of performance for students in years 4–12. You may wish to discuss the implications of asTTle results for your learning area with the Literacy Leader in your school.
  • The Assessment Resource Banks are collections of classroom assessment resources in English, mathematics, and science from Curriculum levels 2–5. The username and password to access the ARBs is available from your school. They are intended to support classroom assessment for learning within New Zealand schools. 

Some of the resources have a specific literacy focus. For example:

  • MW5141 – Level 4 – Communicating in science – Material world: Changes of state – This task assesses student ability to find the text features of an explanation of a scientific idea. The task is essentially a literacy task in the context of scientific writing.
  • LW2072 – Level 4 – Communicating in science – Living world: Moa – This task assesses student ability to find the text features of a science report about moa.
  • LW2071 – Level 4 – Communicating in science – Living world: Variable Oystercatchers -This task assesses student ability to find the text features of a science report about one of our native birds.
  • Subject resources related to NCEA assessments are available - click on the relevant subject page.

What literacy knowledge and skills need to be developed?

  • The Literacy Learning Progressions describe the specific literacy knowledge, skills, and attitudes that students draw on in order to meet the reading and writing demands of the curriculum. Teachers need to ensure that their students develop the literacy expertise that will enable them to engage with the science curriculum at increasing levels of complexity.
  • The Language of Science provides examples of some language features found in traditional science texts.

Library resources

This page contains a number of resources suitable for librarians (and teachers) under the following headings.

Libraries |  Library resources |  Reference resources |  Book-related sites

Libraries

Library resources

  • Any Questions
    Online librarians help students, in real time, find and use quality internet sources for their homework, while building their search and information skills.
  • Create Readers
    This New Zealand blog reviews and promote children's and YA literature (especially New Zealand), events, literacy research, and ways to get, and keep, kids reading.
  • EPIC
    Provides access to an extensive range of quality databases holding millions of electronic resources (covering all aspects of the curriculum from literature to science to Encyclopedia Britannica Online). EPIC is available for use by teachers and students from all parts of New Zealand.
  • PapersPast
    Papers Past contains more than one million pages of digitised New Zealand newspapers and periodicals from 1839 to 1920. It includes publications from all regions of New Zealand.
  • The Researching Librarian
    Web resources for librarians doing research. Although American in focus, NZ librarians will still find it useful.
  • Joyce Valenza’s Neverending Search
    A blog for librarians and other educators that focuses on emerging technologies, searching, and information fluency.
  • School Library Association of New Zealand (SLANZA)
    The School Library Association of New Zealand Aotearoa (SLANZA) supports teaching and learning by providing a national voice for school libraries throughout New Zealand and representing all school library staff.

Reference resources

  • Acronym Finder
    Contains over 60,000 acronyms. Results can be sorted alphabetically and by category filters. Also provides an extensive definition of a word and a link through to The Free dictionary.
  • New Zealand Electronic Text Centre
    The New Zealand Electronic Text Centre is a free online archive of New Zealand and Pacific Islands texts and heritage materials, offering an ever expanding, fully searchable, set of images and full-text books, manuscripts and journals.
  • NZ History Online
    The site features information and resources from within the History Group of the Ministry for Culture and Heritage, Wellington, New Zealand. Three broad categories showcase themes in New Zealand history: Culture and society, Politics and government and War and society.
  • Te Ara
    Te Ara is a comprehensive, free multimedia online Encyclopedia of New Zealand produced by the Ministry of Culture and Heritage. When complete, it will be a comprehensive guide to the country’s peoples, natural environment, history, culture, economy, institutions and society.
  • Your Dictionary.com
    A comprehensive online dictionary that includes: definition, idioms, synonyms, usage examples, and quotes.
  • Wikipedia
    Wikipedia is a popular collaboratively edited web site encyclopedia. Articles provide links to guide the user to related pages with additional information. While an excellent place to begin research, the quality and accuracy of information may vary from article to article.

Book-related sites

  • 100 Picture Books Everyone Should Know
    Annotated list (with book covers) of 100 popular picture books from the New York Public Library.
  • Google Books
    Lets you read, rate, review or preview historical and contemporary books that have been digitised by Google.
  • International Children's Digital Library
    Presents an online collection books that represents outstanding historical and contemporary picture books from throughout the world.
  • LibraryThing
    Developed for book lovers. LibraryThing lets you catalog your books online, connect with people who have similar reading tastes, and rate and review books.
  • Read NZ Te Pou Muramura
    Helps grow generations of readers by advocating for reading in Aotearoa New Zealand and delivering programmes that incentivise reading and writing in schools and communities.
  • Sofa Adventures: Reading Suggestions for Kids, Tweens, and Teens –a list of book choices for kids of all ages.
  • Stone Soup
    The only magazine made up entirely of the creative work of children. Young people ages 8 to 13 around the world have contributed stories, poems, book reviews, and artwork to Stone Soup since 1973.
  • Storylines
    Promotes and provides information on children’s literature in New Zealand including awards, news, Storylines Festival and the International Children’s Book day.

Teaching inquiry: Planning for summative assessment

Planning for my students' needs 

What strategies (evidence-based) are most likely to help my students learn this? In this teaching inquiry, the teacher uses evidence from research and from their own past practice and that of colleagues to plan teaching and learning opportunities aimed at achieving the outcomes prioritised in the focusing inquiry.

Key questions

  • What standards/outcomes are most appropriate to assess student learning?
  • How might we gather evidence for example, in  portfolios?
  • What opportunities are there for student choice in outcomes and modes of assessment?

Why are these questions important?

The key purpose of assessment is to enhance student learning and the quality of teaching and learning programmes. Assessment also enables the provision of feedback to both parents and learners about learning progress. Assessment is linked to qualifications at secondary school. Assessment should:

  • be worthwhile to your students, accurate, and reliable
  • be understood by your students
  • include students in discussion and negotiation of aims, strategies, and progressions - with you and parents, and with each other
  • support improved learning
  • be seen as positive, rather than a process to be feared
  • have a clear purpose and be valid for that purpose.

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Useful resources

NCEA Standards:

Other Resources:

ESOL learners and literacy

Students.

Mastery of literacy in a second language is supported by literacy in the student's first language. Language and literacy knowledge in one language can serve as the foundation for a new language. Dual language books, high interest readers, and in class or withdrawal remediation, can all add to success for literacy learning for ESOL students. Also important is the contribution of whānau and the wider school community, who in many cases are the primary knowledge holders of literacy in a students first language. Social literacies may develop before academic, where language is more formal, restrained, and requires strong subject-specific and technical knowledge.

The following features of effective early literacy programs are recommended: 

1. Oral language and literacy development is supported by the student's first language. 

2. Literacy learning in English is an on-going process that requires time and appropriate support.

3. Instruction and materials are culturally and developmentally appropriate.

4. Literacy programs are meaning-based and balanced.

5. Assessment is reliable, valid, and ongoing. 

6. Professional preparation and development is continually provided for educators regarding linguistic and cultural diversity. 

from  Position Paper on Language and Literacy Development for Young English Language Learners (ages 3-8), Teachers of English to Speakers of Other Languages, 2010

ESOL learners and literacy in the classroom

Making Language and Learning Work DVD 3 – Visual Arts, Year 5/6.
Using differentiated texts is when a teacher uses different texts with different groups of students rather than the same text with the whole class, while still maintaining the same curriculum learning outcomes. The text choice is based upon the student’s level of English or their first language. Effective differentiation is only possible with good assessment knowledge. Some of the texts used may be bilingual texts in order to support the student’s first language. The use of bilingual texts helps students to make connections to their own prior learning and experience, as well as supporting their first language.

Supporting ESOL students to read independently
School librarian, Kim Bizo explains how the Lexile reading programme supports ESOL students to read independently with comprehension. Parent meetings are provided to explain the programme and provides a useful tool for parents to engage with their child's learning.

Bilingual digital stories
Primary school teacher Bridget Harrison talks about using digital stories to support students with English as a second language.

Resources

English Language Learning Progressions
The English Language Learning Progressions (ELLP) explain what ESOL specialists and mainstream teachers need to know about English language learners. They will help teachers to choose content, vocabulary, and tasks that are appropriate to each learner's age, stage, and language-learning needs. This may include learners for whom English is a first language but who would benefit from additional language support.

Working with ESOL learners with basic literacy needs
An article that examines who ESOL literacy learners are, what skills they may have, and practical ways to help them learn in the classroom.

Bilingual Assessment Service Information
This service enables state and state-integrated schools to access a targeted group of trained Resource Teachers (Learning and Behaviour, RTLBs) to administer bilingual assessments of the learning needs of students from language backgrounds other than English. A bilingual assessment can distinguish between language learning needs, additional special learning needs, and social/emotional needs, through dual assessment in their first language and English.

Funded ESOL students and Special Education services

Migrant and refugee background students with special education needs, including those who receive ESOL funding, are entitled to special education services available in New Zealand schools. They would need to meet the eligibility criteria for that particular service (for example, RTLB and RT Lit support, speech language therapy, ORS funding, Supplementary Learning Support). International fee-paying students are not eligible for these services.

The same applies for ESOL funding. A student who has any kind of special education funding is still eligible for ESOL funding as well, provided they meet the ESOL funding criteria.

Focusing Inquiry: Know your students

What literacy knowledge and skills do my students have in English?

Use multiple sources of information to determine the focus of your inquiry – student voice, assessment information, diagnostic tasks.

  • Assessment Tools for Teaching and Learning e-asTTle This is a norm-referenced online tool for assessing reading achievement relevant to levels 2–6 of the curriculum. It provides national norms of performance for students in years 4–12. You may wish to discuss the implications of asTTle results for your learning area with the Literacy Leader in your school.
  • The Assessment Resource Banks : are collections of classroom assessment resources in English, Mathematics, and Science from Curriculum levels 2-5. The username and password to access the ARBs is available from your school. They are intended to support classroom assessment for learning within New Zealand schools. 
  • Subject resources related to NCEA assessments are available - click on the relevant subject page.

What literacy knowledge and skills need to be developed?

  • The Literacy Learning Progressions describe the specific literacy knowledge, skills, and attitudes that students draw on in order to meet the reading and writing demands of the curriculum. Teachers need to ensure that their students develop the literacy expertise that will enable them to engage with the English curriculum at increasing levels of complexity.

NCEA and Literacy

The Government have confirmed the final change package for NCEA, following a comprehensive review of NCEA and  announcement of  seven changes in May 2019.

There are two changes to the original proposed package and they relate to strengthening NCEA’s literacy and numeracy requirements:

  • the new, more robust, literacy and numeracy assessment will be offered to students from Year 9 onwards, rather than from Years 7 and 8
  • in some cases, exceptions to a single literacy and numeracy benchmark qualification without any alternative pathways may be appropriate – particularly for students with English as their second language.

Although no changes to NCEA will be implemented in 2020, the Ministry has started work to progress the changes. We’ll be working alongside teachers and other experts from the education sector, through subject expert groups, to develop the new achievement standards and resources across all NCEA subjects – starting with Level 1. 

The full NCEA change package is available online.

  • Literacy Unit Standards Resources  - These resources have been developed to assist with the planning, implementation and assessment of the level 1 Literacy unit standards.
  • Implementing the literacy unit standards (Word 2007 26KB) - This report prepared by Trish Holden from UC Education Plus investigates how schools are implementing the literacy unit standards in 2011. The report identifies issues, responses from schools, positive aspects and considerations when implementing the standards.

 

Tomorrow when the war began

Students study several aspects of the novel Tomorrow When the War Began, then plan and write about responses based on a selected aspect.

Learning Outcomes | Teaching and Learning | Assessment and Evaluation | Printing Version

Writer: Mark Osbourne
Year level 11
Who are my learners and what do they already know? See:  Planning using inquiry
School curriculum outcomes How your school’s principles, values, or priorities will be developed through this unit

Learning Outcomes

 (What do my students need to learn)

Curriculum achievement objectives (AOs) for:  
English

Processes and strategies

Integrate sources of information, processes, and strategies purposefully and confidently to identify, form, and express increasingly sophisticated ideas:

  • thinks critically about texts with understanding and confidence
  • creates a range of increasingly varied and complex texts by integrating sources of information and processing strategies

Ideas

Select, develop, and communicate connected ideas on a range of topics.

  • develops and communicates comprehensive ideas, information, and understandings

Language features

Select and use a range of language features appropriately for a variety of effects.


  • uses a wide range of text conventions, including grammatical and spelling conventions, appropriately, effectively, and with accuracy.

Structure

Organise texts, using a range of appropriate, effective structures.


  • achieves a sense of coherence and wholeness when constructing texts
Achievement Standard(s) aligned to AO(s) 1.1 Show understanding of specified aspect(s) of studied written text(s), using supporting evidence

Teaching and Learning

 (What do I need to know and do?)

1-2 related professional readings or links to relevant research

Effective Practices in Teaching Writing in NZ Secondary Schools [available from February 2011]

Planning using inquiry

English Teaching and Learning Guide [available from February 2011]

Assessment and Examination Rules and Procedures

Learning task 1:

Learning intention(s)

Establishing prior learning and linking it to the text

KCs/ Principles/Values focus

KCs:

Thinking – explore texts

Relate to others – peer discussion

Learning task 1

Exploring the text

  1. Use the internet to locate answers to these questions. Before you begin, select keywords you will use to carry out your search.
    • How many wars has New Zealand been involved in during the last 50 years?
    • Was there any warning before the terrorist attacks on the World Trade Centre Towers in New York? (September 2001)
    • Are there any civil defence guidelines for what to do if New Zealand was attacked by another country?
    • Where is East Timor, who invaded it in 1975, and what was New Zealand's response to this invasion?
  2. Tomorrow When the War Began by John Marsden is about a group of young people trying to survive after a foreign invasion of Australia. As you read the novel, consider any comparisons you can make between information you located in the pre reading internet search and the text.
  3.  Complete the cloze activity after you finish reading the first chapter.

Learning task 2:

Learning intention(s)

Examining key text aspects

KCs/ Principles/Values focus

KCs:

Thinking – using a range of thinking strategies to build understandings

Learning task 2

Examining plot, setting, character and theme

Plot sequence

Photocopy these events resources and cut them up. In groups, refer to your copies of the novel to put the events in the order in which they occur in the novel.

Plot - building tension

Map key events listed on the plot graph resource to show rising tension within the text.

Being succinct about setting

The broader setting for the novel is modern day Australia. This exercise asks you to clarify exactly what you believe is important and to think carefully about how you express your opinions. Talk about these two questions then develop an answer to each of them within a tight word limit of no more than 25 words for each:

  • How would the novel have been different if it was set in a different time?

  • How would the novel have been different if it was set in a different country?

Understanding characters

  1. Use the profile resource to draw up a list of profiles from the story. Look at all of the major characters (Ellie, Fi, Homer, Chris, Corrie, Lee, Kevin, Robyn).
  2. Choose one of the characters you have created a profile for and examine them in greater depth. Look at the way they develop or change over the course of the novel. Choose one of the characters you think is most important in the novel.
  3. For this character:
    • Identify the kind of person they are at the beginning of the novel. Provide a piece of evidence like a quotation from the novel, or an action that the person undertakes.
    • Identify three steps in their development throughout the novel. Think about behaviours they adopt, new ways of thinking or viewing the world, decisions they make, or things they learn. For each step, identify how they change and provide a piece of evidence for this change. How do you know they have changed?
    • Identify what kind of person they are at the end of the novel. Provide a piece of evidence for how they have changed since the beginning of the novel: a quotation or an action that the person undertakes
    • Comment on why you think they changed. This may be a response to a situation or a challenge, or it may have more to do with what kind of person your character is.
    • Choose the event you believe to be the most important in the novel. Explain how your event does the following:

      • helps to develop character
      • teaches the reader or the character(s) something
      • gets the reader thinking about important ideas behind the novel
      • overcomes a problem for the character

Themes

A theme is a "big" idea contained in a text. It should be a generalised statement that has no reference to the actual text.
Using the themes resource, find three events from the novel and identify the themes these events make you think about.

Learning task 3:

Learning intention(s)

Examining key text aspects

KCs/ Principles/Values focus

KCs:

Thinking – close reading

Learning task 3

Close reading - style

One of the reasons Tomorrow When the War Began is so successful as a novel is the way that John Marsden maintains suspense through his writing. Explore exactly how he does this by completing the following activities.

In this passage, the narrator, Elle, is entering a house where she suspects foreign soldiers might be present. This analysis focuses on the passage which begins on P 127 (McMacmillan edition) with "I sidled closer to the door and stood in an awkward position ...... to P 128 "Robyn!" I screamed.” Read the passage a couple of times. The author has created a mood of suspense and tension. He has done this through:

Choice of words

  1. The author's choice of verbs is important in the passage. He creates a sense of tension, stealth and caution though his use of verbs like "sidled", "pressed", "crouched" and "slipping" early in the passage as Elle enters the room. Later Elle's fear is made clear through the use of verbs like "grip the knob".
  2. The author also makes considerable use of adverbs ("silently", "smoothly", "quietly", "desperately") to underscore the fear and tension of the scene. He also uses adjectives such as "dull shapes" and "dreadful confirmation" to provide insight into the Elle's state of mind and "slow, careful step" "creaking board and "soft tread" to stress the tension of the moment and the need for quiet.

Imagery

  1. The author makes limited use of imagery. When he uses the metaphor "screech of a tortured soul" to compare the sound of the door opening to someone being tortured he is trying to suggest how loud the sound seems to Elle at the same time as he implies the danger she is in.
  2. He uses the simile "I could hear Homer shuffling around, sounding like an old dog trying to get comfortable" to exaggerate the noise Homer was making and also to try to make it clear that this added to Elle's fear.

Structure

  1. The sentences, especially at the most tense moments, are mainly short or broken up into shorter phrases with commas. This helps create a tense breathless feel from Elle, underscoring her fear and the tension of the scene.
  2. the idea of the need for quiet and Elle's attempt to be quiet, is repeated throughout the passage in words like "sidled" "silently and smoothly" "slow, careful" "quietly slipping".
  3. The passage build towards the climax of the sound of the gun being cocked.

Sounds

  1. The author uses the alliterative "silently and smoothly" with the repetition of the 's' helping to establish the idea of stealth and the need for quiet and tension.
  2. He also uses onomatopeia eg: “screech" and "rasped" to depict how loud even small sounds seemed to the nervous Elle.

Dialogue

The only dialogue used is the one word "Robyn!" which together with the "I screamed" and the exclamation mark helps emphasise her panic, her fear of being shot.

Evaluation

  1. Read the sample evaluation of this passage:

    Although written in simple language the passage is mainly successful in depicting the tension felt by the narrator. The short, sometimes staccato sentences, together with the well chosen verbs such as "sidled" and "grip" help us understand her fear and adverbs like "silently and smoothly" and "desperately" are also effective in conveying her state of mind.

    I found the author's choice of images less convincing as I could not imagine how a door opening could sound like "the screech of a tortured soul". Also, to compare Homer to "an old dog trying to get comfortable" in such a tense and dangerous situation, seemed homely, friendly and inappropriate.

    Overall though John Marsden succeeded in making me feel the tension of the scene and the fear of the narrator.

  2. Your teacher will select another short passage. Using the headings above, complete a close reading identifying examples and making comments about meanings and effects.

Thinking Critically

Read this review of the novel
. Identify the key reasons why the reviewer thought the book was excellent. For each reason, decide whether you agree or disagree with the reviewe and provide a piece of evidence (different from examples contained in the review) from the novel to back up your opinion.

Learning task 4:

Learning intention(s)

Drafting and polishing writing.

KCs/ Principles/Values focus

KCs:

Use language, symbols and texts – structure and express understandings about texts

Learning task 4

Developing a piece of formal writing

  1. Develop your responses to this novel in a piece of formal writing. Your writing can be developed and assessed against Achievement Standard 1.5 Produce formal writing. At the end of the year, this work will also become part of preparing for the externally assessed AS 1.1 Show understanding of specified aspect(s) of studied written text(s), using supporting evidence. AS 1.1 requires you to show an understanding of a text and support the points you make with relevant examples and details.
  2. In selecting a topic, it is vital that you select one suited to this text and to your understandings about it. As a first step in choosing, reading then responding to a text you have selected, consider the sample topics set in the draft external assessment resources for AS 1.1. Note the highlighted sections: there are two parts to each topic that should be addressed. After describing a key text aspect [like character, setting, language features, or an event], you are asked to comment on why that aspect helped you understand an important idea in the text.
  3. Choose or adapt one of these topics from the sample topics. Use ideas from learning tasks 1 -3 to help develop your response. Follow the writing guide.
  4. Craft a piece of formal writing which will later be assessed as a piece of formal writing for AS 1.5. Write at least 350 words. Support your ideas with specific details from your text.
  5. After completing a first draft, read your piece aloud to help identify parts of the writing that require reworking. Before writing a final version of your piece, proof-read it to improve on technical accuracy. This piece of writing can now be considered for assessment for AS 1.5 Produce formal writing.

Preparing for the external standard 1.1

Look back at the formal writing piece you developed earlier and use it to help prepare for AS 1.1 Show understanding of specified aspect(s) of studied written text(s), using supporting evidence. Don’t rote learn this essay then attempt to somehow adapt a learnt essay to a topic in the exam. You will be much better prepared if you familiarise yourself again with the text as well as its ideas and supporting evidence, then adapt your understandings and supporting evidence to fit the requirements of the topics set.

Assessment and Evaluation

 (What is the impact of my teaching and learning?)

Formative and/or Summative assessment task(s), including how will feedback be provided 1.5 Produce formal writing. Refer to the assessment schedule.

Provision for identifying next learning steps for students who need:

  • further learning opportunities
  • increased challenge

This piece of writing should be an integrated part of the year’s writing programme. Refer to

English Teaching and Learning Guide 

Conditions of Assessment Guidelines for formal writing

Effective Practices in Teaching Writing in NZ Secondary Schools

for more details.

Tools or ideas which, for example might be used to evaluate:

  • progress of the class and groups within it
  • student engagement

leading to :

  • changes to the sequence
  • addressing teacher learning needs
See:  Planning using inquiry

Printing this unit:

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Innocence, imagination, obsession – Heavenly creatures

Students respond to controversial ideas in the film Heavenly Creatures and the play Daughters of Heaven then deliver presentations to the class about important aspects of the film and/or the play.

Learning Outcomes | Teaching and Learning | Assessment and Evaluation | Printing Version

Writer: Lucy Moore
Year level 12
Who are my learners and what do they already know? Planning using inquiry
School curriculum outcomes How your school’s principles, values, or priorities will be developed through this unit

Learning Outcomes

 (What do my students need to learn)

Curriculum achievement objectives (AOs) for:  
English

Processes and strategies

Integrate sources of information, processes, and strategies purposefully, confidently, and precisely to identify, form, and express increasingly sophisticated ideas.


  • thinks critically about texts with understanding and confidence
  • creates a range of increasingly coherent, varied, and complex texts by integrating sources of information and processing strategies

Ideas

Select, develop, and communicate sustained ideas on a range of topics.


  • develops, communicates, and sustains increasingly sophisticated ideas, information, and understandings

Language features

Select and integrate a range of language features appropriately for a variety of effects.


  • uses a wide range of oral, written, and visual language features fluently and with control to create meaning and effect and to sustain interest

Structure

Organise texts, using a range of appropriate, coherent, and effective structures.

  • organises and develops ideas and information for a particular purpose or effect, using the characteristics and conventions of a range of text forms with control.
Achievement Standard(s) aligned to AO(s) AS 2.5 Construct and deliver a crafted and controlled oral text

Teaching and Learning

 (What do I need to know and do?)

1-2 related professional readings or links to relevant research

Using inquiry to plan secondary English programes

English Teaching and Learning Guide 

Assessment and Examination Rules and Procedures

Learning task 1

Learning intention(s)

Establishing prior learning and linking it to the text

KCs/ Principles/Values focus

KCs:

Thinking – explore texts

Learning task 1

Building Prior Knowledge

Before engaging with either text explore the Parker Hulme Case newspaper archive on the Canterbury Public Library website, which contains an archive of newspaper articles discussing the case.

Select the appropriate information in order to complete a fact sheet.

Learning task 2

Learning intention(s)

Examining key text aspects

KCs/ Principles/Values focus

KCs:
Thinking – using a range of thinking strategies to build understandings

KCs:
Thinking – explore texts

 Relate to others – peer discussion

Learning task 2

Reading the play Daughters of Heaven

  1. Understanding key aspects of the play Daughters of Heaven will be enhanced if a variety of approaches are used:
    • participate in drama games designed to enliven interpretation and deepen understanding of Daughters of Heaven.
    • various parts from the play could be allocated to students in advance in order to facilitate
    •  to help develop an understanding of key characters, individuals or groups could be allocated one character, in preparation for a hotseat.
  2. "Innocence. Imagination. Obsession" are three words which go a long way towards summing up the central themes in Daughters of Heaven. For each of these three words brainstorm how it is presented in the play, using quotes to support your ideas.
  3. Use a values continuum by making a judgement on the following issue:
    • Pauline Parker and Juliet Hulme "have been resurrected as unlikely folk heroes - bright women in a repressive, dull town resolving a personal crisis in the only way the powerless kids knew how". Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
    • Allocate one side of the room for those who strongly agree with the question/statement and the other side of the room for those who strongly disagree with the question/statement. Go to the area of the room which represents your response to the question/statement.
    • The space in between these areas should represent a continuum where you can place yourself in according to the strength of your response. If you are unsure how you feel, stay in the middle to watch and eventually participate in the proceedings.
       The teacher then facilitates a controlled discussion by calling upon students to outline why they have taken that particular stance. At any time you may choose to adjust where you are standing.

Learning task 3

Learning intention(s)

 Examining key text aspects

KCs/ Principles/Values focus

KCs:

Thinking – close reading

Learning task 3

Viewing the film Heavenly Creatures

Pre-viewing

Before viewing the film consider the choice of title. It comes from a poem, The ones that I worship, written by Juliet and Pauline. Using the text of the poem to support your ideas, write a journal entry discussing the significance of the title and its relationship to what you already know about Juliet and Pauline from your study of Daughters of Heaven.

Viewing

Use the viewing focus sheet. As each group views Heavenly Creatures they should record information to help them answer the questions listed under their allocated heading. At the conclusion of the film each group should present its information to the class. Students can then incorporate relevant information as they develop their presentations.

Setting

Peter Jackson went to great lengths to use actual locations and archival film footage to precisely recreate the environment. Discuss the following points as a class:

  • What was the purpose of the archive footage? What effect did it have upon the beginning of the film?
  • How does Jackson use contrast in setting to convey the differences in the upbringing of Juliet and Pauline?
  •  In what ways is Heavenly Creatures a specifically New Zealand film? Does the fact that Heavenly Creatures is a film about New Zealanders by New Zealanders have any effect on the film as a whole?

Learning task 4

Learning intention(s)

Examining key text aspects

KCs/ Principles/Values focus

KCs:

Thinking – close reading

Learning task 4

Heavenly perspectives

Heavenly Creatures and Daughters of Heaven feature different narrative perspectives. In Daughters of Heaven the audience is largely shown the situation through the eyes of Bridget O'Malley, housekeeper of the Hulme household. In Heavenly Creatures, however, Pauline's diary entries are used in a voice-over method to convey her motivation and intentions

In small groups choose a sequence from Heavenly Creatures or Daughters of Heaven which presents a subjective point of view. Talk about the effects that the subjective point of view has upon the audience's reaction to the content of the film.

Learning task 5

Learning intention(s)

 Preparing and delivering an oral presentation

KCs/ Principles/Values focus KCs: Use language, symbols and texts – structure and express understandings about texts 

Learning task 5

Deciding on a presentation topic

  1. Look over the aspects of the two texts you have worked on in tasks 1 to 4. One or more of these aspects could form the basis of your presentation. You may choose to give an impression of the play or film as a whole or a particular theme, character, quotation or scene.
  2. Make a final decision on your topic. Your presentation will be about an important aspect(s) in your study of the film Heavenly Creatures and the play Daughters of Heaven, although your presentation could focus on one text.
  3. Ensure that topic gives you enough scope to speak for at least four minutes and that it will be informative and interesting to your class. Briefly discuss your topic with your teacher before developing your presentation any further.
  4. Plan the content of your presentation. Structure your material as follows: 

    in your introduction:
    • decide on an arresting opening to interest your audience
    • which highlight the key aspect(s) of the text(s) you will focus on.
    in the body:
    • give further key details, supported by explanations or examples which could be drawn from your work in tasks 1 to 4.
    in the conclusion:
    • signal that you are finishing
    • restate your key points in summary form.

 Rehearsing and delivering your presentation

  1. You will be assessed on how well you:
    • develop and communicate ideas about your topic
    • integrate visual and verbal delivery techniques to present your ideas to your audience
  2. In pairs, practise delivering your presentation. Make any necessary adjustments. Your presentation must be at least four minutes long. Look at selected exemplars on the Level 2 NCEA Speeches and Performances video. Comparable exemplars for your presentation can be found for the internal assessment resource I Know Where You're Coming From. Discuss the exemplars' strengths and areas they could be improved. Look at and discuss the assessment schedule.
  3. Deliver your presentation.
  4. In 2011, your presentation can be assessed against Achievement Standard 90376: Deliver a presentation. From 2012, it can be assessed against its replacement, the new Level 2 oral presentation standard, AS 2.4 Construct and deliver a crafted and controlled oral text.The same standard of oral presentation is required at each achievement level for both the old and new achievement standards.

Assessment and Evaluation

 (What is the impact of my teaching and learning?)

Formative and/or Summative assessment task(s), including how will feedback be provided AS 2.5 Construct and deliver a crafted and controlled oral text

Provision for identifying next learning steps for students who need:

  • further learning opportunities
  • increased challenge

This piece of writing should be an integrated part of the year’s writing programme. Refer to

English Teaching and Learning Guide 

Conditions of Assessment Guidelines for oral presentations.

 for more details.

Tools or ideas which, for example might be used to evaluate:

  • progress of the class and groups within it
  • student engagement

leading to :

  • changes to the sequence
  • addressing teacher learning needs
Planning using inquiry

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